5 Descriptive
Sentences:
1.
The walk from my
room to class was, in a word, miserable.
2.
Even through my
bedroom window I could see it would be, as there was freezing rain falling.
3.
As soon as I
stepped out into the gray morning the downpour pelted my face, forcing me to
stare at my feet as I tramped quickly though fresh puddles to the classroom
building.
4.
The wind didn’t
help matters much, biting my nose and cheeks and hands.
5.
As I clenched my
fists and shoved them into the pockets of my steel-colored coat, I wished
nothing more than to be back in my soft, warm bed, but I walked on, knowing I
had gone too far to turn back.
Revised:
I knew the walk from my room to class would be miserable
as soon as I saw the freezing rain outside my bedroom window. When I finally
stepped out into the gray morning, the downpour pelted my bare face, forcing me
to stare at my feet as I splashed through newly formed puddles to the classroom
building. The wind didn’t help matters much, biting my nose and cheeks and
hands, and as I shoved my clenched fists into the pockets of my steel-colored
coat, I wished nothing more than to be back in my cozy bed, but I walked on,
knowing I had come too far to turn back now.
5 Narrative Sentences:
1.
“Wait! Wait!”
Lucy shouted as she ran after the big yellow school bus.
2.
But the red
brake lights never lit up.
3.
Lucy sighed as
she watched the bus drive away without her.
4.
Late again, she
thought.
5.
She would have
to explain to Mrs. Marcus why she was late for the fifth time, and this time,
there was no excuse.
Revised:
“Wait! Wait!” Lucy shouted as she ran after the big
yellow school bus. But the bright red brake lights never lit up, and she sighed
as she watched the bus drive away without her. Lucy was late again, and now she
would have to explain to Mrs. Marcus why she was late for the fifth time, and
this time, there was no excuse.
5 How-To Sentences:
How to Bathe a Cat
1.
When you want to
bathe your cat, you will first need to acquire dish soap and towels (which will
probably end up being unnecessary).
2.
Next, proceed to
chase your cat around your home.
3.
Eventually, you
may capture your cat.
4.
In the event
that you do, place the cat in water.
5.
Finally,
you will garner countless scratches on
your face and arms and then proceed to let the cat go free, wet fur and all.
Revised:
When attempting to bathe a cat, first acquire unnecessary
items such as dish soap, a water source, a tub, and towels, and then proceed to
chase the cat until it is caught. Next, try to place the cat in the tub of
water and garner numerous scratches. Finally, give up and set the cat free, wet
fur and all.
...well, that's that! Why don't you give it a try?
...well, that's that! Why don't you give it a try?
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